tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-481817035093178721.post2045868418311514058..comments2023-06-01T04:53:14.190-07:00Comments on Urban Sketchers: Tri-Cities, Washington: 5/7/14 - "Grain Elevator on Clearwater Ave., Kennewick WA"Jim Bumgarnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13348441956911573247noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-481817035093178721.post-58285229858112285532014-05-07T22:28:47.481-07:002014-05-07T22:28:47.481-07:00Great critique Jim! I agree with Jim, great work P...Great critique Jim! I agree with Jim, great work Patti G!<br />Patti Kpattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06637370289113981820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-481817035093178721.post-8158026176320568302014-05-07T20:08:07.893-07:002014-05-07T20:08:07.893-07:00Great lines and detailing, Patty. I like how you c...Great lines and detailing, Patty. I like how you captured the light by delineating the shadowed areas too. And, it may be a bit wider than in real life, but what happened is it gave the building greater mass and weight. Frank Ching told us that sometimes you have to embellish (my word, not his) a sketch to really capture the essence of the object being sketched. Nice job - Really nice!Jim Bumgarnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15239031501783525649noreply@blogger.com